I found this over at the (new) legal writer, who found it at lawjobs.com, who got it from Legal Times, where it was authored by :
14 Tips to Become a Lighter, Tighter Writer
No judge ever says, ‘I just wish the attorney had used bigger words’
Here are the headings for each tip. You can read the full article here.
1. You wanted what? 2. Don’t be a stranger. 3. Easy does it. 4. Descend from the clouds. 5. Take a stand. 6. Remember the sweet spot of style. 7. Trim is in. 8. Don’t stand on authority. 9. Use the one-minute rule. 10. Does anal-retentive have a hyphen? 11. Find strength in numbers. 12. You’re perfect, now change. 13. Realize when it’s triage time. 14. Enjoy the happy days.